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Not Thinking the Sentence Through

March 23rd, 2010

What’s wrong with this sentence? Aside from the typo in the compound verb in the ending dependent clause:

Mobile device manufacturer Palm has announced that it is putting its popular Pre and Pixi models on a production halt until it can sell of its current inventory.

I’d hate to see the sales figures for their unpopular models.

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  1. Troy
    March 23rd, 2010 at 10:45 | #1

    Palm was doing channel-stuffing with the Pre, only half the Pres they’ve “shipped” have actually sold.

    Palm is sooo toast. They’ve got to compete with Google, Microsoft, Nokia, and RIM for 5th place.

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