Not Thinking the Sentence Through
March 23rd, 2010
What’s wrong with this sentence? Aside from the typo in the compound verb in the ending dependent clause:
Mobile device manufacturer Palm has announced that it is putting its popular Pre and Pixi models on a production halt until it can sell of its current inventory.
I’d hate to see the sales figures for their unpopular models.
Palm was doing channel-stuffing with the Pre, only half the Pres they’ve “shipped” have actually sold.
Palm is sooo toast. They’ve got to compete with Google, Microsoft, Nokia, and RIM for 5th place.